Service Description

This review gives you focused feedback on the first 10 pages of your manuscript—perfect for making a strong first impression with publishers, agents, editors, and readers. We’ll look at: - How your story opens and grabs attention - Narrative voice and tone - whether they feel consistent - Character introduction and development and if they feel real - Pacing, flow, and line-level clarity - Dialogue effectiveness and sentence-level polish You’ll receive a marked-up file with comments and suggestions, plus a brief summary letter with next steps to tighten your opening.